My poor English Its quite hot in Hongkong today!!! I think Hongkong doesnt have four seasons in a clearly way... It feels like we just have a ling period summer but quite short winter.... actually its not that cold in winter haaaa Its around 10 degress.
Apr 23, 2018 5:52 AM
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Instead of using in a clearly way , skip that and get to the point. Here's how I would write it. It's quite hot in Hongkong today!!! I don't think Hongkong has four seasons, because it feels like we have such long periods of summer, but very short periods of winter.Actually, it's not that cold in the winter. It's only 10 degrees.
April 23, 2018
Oh thank you for your advice!!!
April 23, 2018
I can mostly understand, but I can definitely tell that your English is broken in some places. I didn't quite understand what you meant by "clearly way...".
April 23, 2018