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Who can help me to fix mistakes in my essay? Topic: Some people think that extreme sports help to build character

Nowadays, the problem of building character causes great argument and controversy. Some people believe that extreme sports can help to build your character while others think that it is not true and extreme sports is nothing more than amusement. Who is right?

As for me, I believe that extreme sports really can help to build your character. To begin with, extreme sports is dangerous and dangerous make us strong as physically as mentally. What is more, it is gives us a great experience which helps us in live. Finally, the people who can fight with his fears is strong character people.

However, there exists another point of view on this issue. First of all, some people thinks that extreme sports can frighten people. Besides, it can make him feel weak, not strong.

Despite my respect for this opinion, I cannot share it because extreme sports will help people to fight with his fears. Moreover, one should not ignore the fact that when people feels weak he stars to working on himself.

In conclusion, I would like to say that the problem of building character is still to be discussed. As for me, I also would like to say you that if you can do extreme sports - do it! It will be fearfully first, but it will make you a strong character person.

Apr 23, 2018 4:37 PM
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April 23, 2018
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