what is my mistakes in this paragraph?
DEATH OF BEES
I think this topic is interesting, okay , no further ado ,lets start.
DEATH OF BEES ,is it real ?! all the statistical studying confirm what I said , WHO published new paper in this topic and I found in conclusion of it the following results: 1- new parasite life in the trachea then, make a respiratory failure for the bee, 2- pollution like pad insecteside ,neonecotideen is the worst insecticide used with bees becase its attached to the body of the bee and when it inter the BEEHIVE the neonicotideen will spread in the whole and will going to kill another bees ,eventually the scientists is making now clinical trail to improve the bad result of neacotideen . in my think they should regret about what did they.
Now iam feeling nostalgia , I remember when I killed a bee I stilled cry on it even my tears stopped