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Is it grammatically right to write this sentence about the Busch act NCLB and the Obama act RTTT?

Bush act " No child left behind " may have diffused negative expectations discouraging  people to chose teacher training career. Instead , the Obama act "race to the top" may have diffused positive expectations  inducing them to chose teacher training career.

Over the correctness of this sentence, what do you think about this comparison ?  Thank you !

May 19, 2018 7:47 PM