my mistakes?!

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your goals 

You must start your goals immediately, put it down in your note for remember yourself everyday, make a deadline for every goal, and don't be depressed from the people that impact on your objectives, be a responsible, punctual, adaptable. When you finished your goals you will be jubilant ,then you will ravenous for other coals.<o:p></o:p>

Put your life in the straight way and never get out , learn everything you will see, and never stop . take the action from this moment and never ever procrastinating. Superb people how make their goals for long-term ,they never boring or stop , be like these people and you will see the change.     <o:p></o:p>

May 24, 2018 8:38 AM
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When you want to learn new vocabulary, look for it in texts, in audios or on videos.  Then you will begin to learn the natural verb/noun collocations used with your new words.

A collocation is a pair of words often used together.

For example, we often:

set (v), work towards (v), achieve (v) our goals (n)

We do not usually start (v) or impact (v) our goals (n)

May 24, 2018
Alright, Try not to use the comma more then twice. Like that you wouldn't add a comma, everytime you want to state something else, you would add a period. :))
May 24, 2018