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Help for a funny translation wanted

For German/English speakers: Please, can you help me to translate the German pun appropriately into English, not Denglish?

 

"Wenn die Bienen den ganzen Tag summen,

muss ihnen doch abends der Schädel brummen." (Dieter Mucke)

 

If bees continuously hum,

Headaches will come in the sum.

 

Or so... :-)

 

Thank you.

Apr 2, 2019 5:59 PM
Comments · 9
If busy bees buzz all day long

their heads will pound just like a gong.

April 2, 2019
If busy bees hum without a break

their heads will surely start to ache.

Can someone please stop me???

April 2, 2019
Ok, I managed to get the humming bees out of my head without further headaches. :)
April 2, 2019
The last one isn't a perfect rhyme but I still think it's funny.
April 2, 2019
If bees just buzz and hum and whir

their headaches must be quite severe.

April 2, 2019
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