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Could you help me check my paragraph I my hindsight, i recall she was a good girl who always help me a lot. She maybe is not a beautiful in appearance but a decent person. We had a lot of unforgetable momories.

I know everyone will change, that is life priciple but until now i can not accept her change.

She becomes another person who is stranger with me. And i fell a little disappointed in her.!

Apr 4, 2019 4:37 PM
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You should post it as notebook entry to get corrections: https://www.italki.com/notebooks.

Some tips:

- capitalise the word "I": I recall

- check the spelling, e.g: unforgettable memories; felt disappointed

- use past tense when needed: helped

April 4, 2019
Thank you for your comment.
April 5, 2019
Zhenn
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