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Apr 12, 2019 4:30 PM
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     You can post it on the Notebook section.
      There are a special correction tools for English speakers that enable them to give you corrections.
      Good luck!
April 12, 2019
For the most part it is correct. A few errors. To be honest, it is better than most American kids in high school attempting to write a short essay. 
April 18, 2019
Learning abroad is something perfect if you've got some experience in learning a language.
April 12, 2019
Language Skills
English, Korean, Russian, Ukrainian
Learning Language
English, Korean