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hoan
write a paragraph about advantages of smartphone (about 100 words)
Apr 19, 2019 12:45 PM
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Perhaps, as a learner, it would be best if you wrote the paragraph and we corrected it.

Some points to consider however:

Mobile phones allow instant communication, in almost any place you may find yourself, and this is a great advantage in times of emergency.

These phones also provide certain apps and an internet connection, and these applications carry benefits of their own.

There are of course disadvantages of mobile phones, and perhaps this can be the next paragraph...

April 19, 2019
hoan
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, German, Vietnamese
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, German