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Victor Solovyev
Attempt to translate your own poem
I'm in flame from delight at sunset,
And blazing, remembering the last day.
I'm burning in your dress without regret,
And at dawn I emit the last ray.

I'm smoldering about your eyes,
Memories of days gone by.
My love getting bigger size,
When your love is nearby.

I'm sparkly, flare up and shining:
When your lips burn me with a kiss.
I'm glows, smile and burning,
I know there is a reason for this.

I was not destined to burn out,
While shine, holy is your face.
Reject eternity without a doubt,
I will light your way in any case.




23 апр. 2019 г., 17:33
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How would an English native speaker value the translation which I think from my humble point of view it is wonderful.
23 апреля 2019 г.
Nada, thanks for your reply
23 апреля 2019 г.
Victor Solovyev
Language Skills
English, Russian
Learning Language
English