I was wondering if you someone look at my note below and say what problems may it has! Thanks.
1- After I got my driver's license, I started to travel with my own car.
2- After you get your driver's license, you find out that all your friends want rides.
3- Before I had my driver's license, I was really upset of it.
4- Once I had a driver's license, I started to travel.
5- As soon as I got my bachelor's degree, I found a new job.
6- Until I graduated, I'd never had any job.
7- By the time I graduated from college at Bachelor's degree, my brother had already graduated at Master's degree.
8- As soon as I got my first job, I started to save money.
9- Until I had my first job, I'd had just a bicycle in my life.
10- The moment I opened a bank account and got my first paycheck I asked my credit card from the manager.