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Guilherme Graciano
Writing Club: Day 5
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.

For today's topic you have to create an uncommon dialogue
This is not a competition, mistakes are welcome here.

Sarah: What's up!
Eliza: What's up!
Sarah: I've just passed Amanda, and she was crying, what have happened?
Eliza: Haven't you known? Her boyfriend cheated on her.
Sarah: What? Well.., she has finally found out.
Eliza: Hmm? You already knew?
Sarah: Yeah! I am the person he cheated with!
Eliza: OMG!
May 12, 2019 4:44 AM
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Thanks, Guilherme! ;-)
May 12, 2019
Haha Olga. This was wonderful, great job building up the scene!
May 12, 2019
- Hello, you look tired, what's up?
- Nothing, it was just a tedious day.
- Look, what is a spot on your sleeve! Is it blood?
- Yes, I've cut my finger today, nothing serious.
- My father called me and told that he can not find his gun after out visit. Don't you know where it is?
- No, I put in in the garage after hunting.
- Ok. Oh, have you herd that Mary, your ex wife, was killed?
- Mary! How it possible!
- Yes, it was a robbery, someone robbed her neighbour and she was an innocent victim just because she appeared there in the wrong time.
- OMG, it's terrible!
- Yes, I didn't like her, but... And the detective from the police called today, he want ask you some questions.
- Me?
- Yes! 
- Why are you looking at me so strange! Don't you think...
- I just want to laundry your shirt.
May 12, 2019
Mokl    Do you study for the exame
Mohamed     yes. but its too diffecult to keep the new asbects
Mokl. yes, i a have the same problem 
Mohamed    do you figure out any way to over come thes proplem 
Mokl. yes. i am search it for google and looked at the pictures its easy way to remember  
Mohamed okay i will try it 
Mokl okay my best wishes with exame 😊
May 12, 2019
Mohamed Shokry text:
Mok: Have you studied for the exam?
Mohamed: Yes. But it's too hard to keep the new subjects(?).
Mok: Me too, I had the same problem.
Mohamed: Have you figured out any way to overcome this problem?
Mok. Yes. I am searching it on google and looking at the pictures, it's an easier way to remember.
Mohamed: Okay, I will try it.
Mok: Okay, good luck on your exam. 😊

“I” is always capitalized when meaning the person that is speaking. أَنَا = I
Always start a new line of dialogue with capitalized letter.
Use present continuous when the action is happening at the same time the person is speaking
Use present perfect when the action have happened in the past but the effects are in the present, this time tense emphasize the result of the action not the time when it has happened.
Well..this is the way I feel about this tenses, I am not a native, so only they can say if this is right.

Good job!
May 12, 2019
Guilherme Graciano
Language Skills
English, Japanese, Portuguese
Learning Language
English, Japanese