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Guilherme Graciano
Writing Club: Day 7
This is the Writing Club, a place where everyone can write an essay about a topic that will change daily. You can write about what you want and feel.

For today's topic you have to describe a person ( that person can be fictional)
This is not a competition, mistakes are welcome here.

This is a fictional person:
John is a middle-aged man,he has brown skin, he has green oval eyes and a round face with a full beard, he has short grizzled straight hair, he is tall and has a well-built body from his past days in college, he can be really scary to strangers, but who knows him, knows this is a misconception, he is a volunteer in the local community and donates to an orphanage, he is so kind that sometimes irritate, he has three adopted sons that he raised alone, at that time some people around him said that he was being selfish when adopting these children, because he was a lone person and had never gotten in a relationship, but after all he raised them with love, and they love him and that is what matter.
May 14, 2019 4:57 AM
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This is a fictional person:
John is a middle-aged man, he has brown skin and a round face with a full beard. He had  green oval eyes, but now he can't see them by himself. Because he had a terrible car accident and lost his eye sight ability. Since then he has been really scary to meet strangers. One day his friend brought someone to John's house. John heard her voice, but he couldn't see her. She pointed the piano in the living room, and said, "oh, you have a piano. I play at an orphanage as a volunteer. Would you like to hear my playing?" John was surprised to know she was volunteering at the place where he has donated. "Yes, please." She played it. The music was the one he heard every time he visited to donate. He didn't know see her but he remembered her music. One year later, they got married and adopted three children. They raised them with love. Even though he lost his eyesight, he found love. 
May 15, 2019
One upon a time ,there was a man who recognised for his piousness , loyalty , truthfulness . He had such qualities from his childhood days . He was a modest person as well . People used to call him a man of truth and whenever an issue people had they used to come to him to get the matter solved as he was a just person who always loved justice and with his wisdom he used to solve the matters . He was a business man he never ever cheated in his business he always had reality what this product is ,as if it has any defect then he letted tye buyers know that if the product has quality he always exhibited, that mich spectacular soul he has he never wanted to earn money illegally . He always concern about goodness among the people and he avoided immodesty, lying, hatenes ,foul language, nad intonations etc . When he talk he used to be gentle , soft and more open . He spent his leasure period alone at a mountain cave to conceive what actually life is about as people used to drink n spread badness used women's as slaves never respected them nor they had any moral or ethnic way of life .he strived to preach people to make civilized so they could have a sumptuous way of living life ... He was a great person he gave message of peace , love and humanity 😊✌😘
May 15, 2019
Good job,Hanji, you took my essay and make something new,  I like the way you turn my character and made him find love. Wonderful!!
May 15, 2019
He is thirty two, never was married. Not because he had not a decent girl-friend, he was worry about his freedom. For him marriage was like a prison. He is very educated, has a job in one international company, speaks English fluently, likes tennis and detective stories. In the morning he always drinks strong black coffee without sugar. But he likes sweets. He prefers to control everything, especially women, that's why he never falls in love. He never lives without schedule, never does unpredictable things, but he likes unusual people who don't care about somebody's opinion. Sometimes he has a bad mood without a reason and hates all people in the world, drinks alcohol, dreams to live like a monk in the forest. Kind of misanthrope. He can be aggressive and tough. He tries to be better, feels shame, don't believe in forgiveness. He is already thinking about his own family, but he will always keep the exit for escaping.
May 14, 2019
What will be the next topic?
May 15, 2019
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Guilherme Graciano
Language Skills
English, Japanese, Portuguese
Learning Language
English, Japanese