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One day in the zoo

Last Saturday, my family and I went al the zoo Selwo Aventure. We got up early and I made many sandwiches, one salad and put them in a bag. The trip was fun. My daughters asked about the aminals of the zoo and they imited at them.

When we arrived, get on a bus and went into at the zoo. There was a lot of animals in semi-freedom. My daughters were amazing. Also there was bridges and lakes with fishes and ducks and one zone with thousand births.

In the end, we were very tired. Some day we came at the zoo.

May 25, 2019 7:13 AM
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One day at the zoo

Last Saturday, my family and I all went to the zoo, Selwo Adventure. We got up early and I made many sandwiches and one salad, and put them in the bag. The trip was fun. My daughters asked about the animals of the zoo and they imitated them. When we arrived by bus, we went into the zoo. There were a lot of animals in semi-freedom. My daughters were amazing! There were also bridges and lakes with fish and ducks and one zone with a thousand birds. In the end, we were very tired. Someday we will go back to the zoo!


Grammar points:
There was + singular noun
There were + plural noun

When we are talking about general places, we use “at” instead of “in”.

The plural of “fish” is also “fish”! It is an exception to the rule.

“a thousand” goes together. Remember to put the “a”!

”Come” and “go” are a bit tricky in English. The reason it is “go” in this case is that you are telling a story from the past and you are no longer actually at the zoo while writing it. If you were still at the zoo, it would be “come”. Come means to come where you are and go means to go somewhere else away from you!

December 3, 2019

One day in the zoo

Last Saturday, my family and I went al to the zoo Selwo Aventure. We got up early and I made many sandwiches, one salad and put them in a bag. The trip was fun. My daughters asked me about the aminals of the zoo and they imitated at them. 

When we arrived, we got on a the bus and went into at the zoo. There were a lot of animals in semi-freedom. My daughters were amazing. Also there were bridges and lakes with fishes and ducks and one zone with thousand birth  birds.

In the end, we were very tired. Someday we will come back at to the zoo.

May 25, 2019
My family and I,  went to the zoo

And they imitated them. 

When we arrived,  we got on a bus and we got into the zoo (or we entered the zoo or we walked into the zoo) 

There were a lot of animals in freely roaming (or living in semi-freedom) 

My daughters were amazed.  (Or Stunned) 

There were also bridges and lakes with fish and ducks and an area with thousands birds. 

In the end (or eventually) we were really tired. 

Someday we will come back to the zoo. 
May 25, 2019

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