I am glad to be here, trying to find my language exchange partner, who is interested in Mandarin learning.
while I am an English speaker, not a very skilled level, and some strong accents or wrong pronunciation in my oral English sometimes, but I don't think this will stop us from understanding each other.
To further improve my English, especially learn from conversation. if you'd like, I can help you on your written and spoken Mandarin.
Let's try to schedule an online talk, then see how it goes, what we can help each other.
First you should work on punctuation, that’s the easiest part in my opinion.
You seem to use the wrong punuation way to much.