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English Business Email help - Mainly Grammar check
Hi guys, I just finished an important email. It has been proof-reading through Grammaly, but I am still not confident to send out,. Could you please help? Appreciated all constructive feedbacks. English learning is fun. cheers !

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Hi xxxx

How are you doing? 

I attended the KPMG Webinar today. I am excited to learn more about the digital transformation from your speech. Particularly, I like your answer to the last question of whether small enterprises should implement Blockchain. I agree, for digital transformation, we need to put the business owners' need and goal as priorities. 

If you don't mind I ask, in terms of your comment on the digital implementation, you said that:" the business owner should be aware that digital transformation is an ongoing improvement, there might be failures during the process". 

But, when the project failed or need to change to a new path, how the digital consultant handles the situation well? For my understanding, the clients pay for the consultancy and they expect positive outcomes. Most of them even don't understand the technical process or challenges. 

Would your team educates the customers since the beginning for the failure possibility or you have a particular risk-management strategy for the problem? 

Thanks for reading. I understand that you are very busy, if you don't have time to respond, it is totally fine, don't worry about that. As you know, I am always being curious and want to learn more. :)
Cheers 

Vivian 
May 1, 2020 5:43 AM
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I attended the KPMG Webinar today. I am excited to learn more about the digital transformation you spoke about in from your speech. Particularly, I liked your answer to the last question of whether small enterprises should implement Blockchain. I agree, for digital transformation, we need to put the business owners' needs and goals as priorities. 

If you don't mind me I asking in terms of your comment on the digital implementation, you said that:" the business owner should be aware that digital transformation is an ongoing improvement, there might be failures during the process". 

But, when the a project fails or needs to change to a new path, how does the digital consultant handles the situation well? For my understanding, the clients pay for the consultancy and they expect positive outcomes. Most of them even don't understand the technical process or challenges. 

Would your team educates the customers since from the beginning for the failure possibility of failure or do you have a particular risk-management strategy for the problem? 



I hope that helps.

eichatd

May 1, 2020
Vivian
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English