Anyone can help me to correct my English text? Thanks a lot!
Hi everyone, I'm Mya. I'm going to give Vietnamese lessons on Italki. I've written an introduction in English and would love you to correct my mistakes! Thanks a lot! Below is the text:
"Hi! My name is Mya, I'm living in Ha Noi.
I currently work as a freelance e-learning designer and developer. My clients come from all over the world such as America, Canada, France, Australia. I love exchange languages, meeting new people and discovering different cultures.
I had 7 years living, studing and working in France. And I know very well how difficult it is to learn a language which is totally different from our mother language, but also, how interesting it is! That's the reason why I decided to give Vietnamese lessons, to help people like you discover my language in an easy and fun way.
Anyone who learns a new language woul ask this question: How to improve quickly? For me, there are 3 factors.
First of all, your mindset. Have you ever had the feeling that you can understand and read well, but you just can't speak? In my case, yes. Before, whenever I talked in foreign language, I tried to be perfect: make a perfect sentence with perfect grammar and perfect pronunciation. And I ended up with saying nothing at all. That's the same reason why children are usually make it more easily than adults. Yes, because they are not afraid of making mistake. And you, are you ready to making mistakes and let me help you correct them?
Factor number 2: the method. In my lesson, I won't let the grammar and vocabulary approaches you in a boring way. We will have real conversations about any subjects in life. Then I will help you understand the grammar, give you more vocabulary to express your self and correct your pronunciation. You will learn as a child learning their mother language: listen, repeat and then understand.
The last factor, and the most important to get better in learning a language is: practice, practice and practice. Learning with me, we will revise again and again what you learned, until you are able to use it naturally and confidently.
Voilà, are you ready to go with me in the adventure of learning Vietnamese? Book my lessons and I will see you soon in my class!
Thank you for watching!"
Enjoy your day!