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Is my sentence correct?
I'm writing an essay but idk if this sentence is correct. "this program has received a lot of positive feedbacks from students saying that this program has increased their confidence and decision making skills and they are able to manage their stress effectively"
May 27, 2020 6:27 AM
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This program has received a lot of positive feedback from students. The students said the program increased their confidence, decision making skills, and helped them learn to manage their stress effectively.

try something like the above. When making more than two points - separate with commas. Use “and” at the end. Make sure you are not writing “run on” sentences. :). You’re writing is good. It just needs a little structure.
May 27, 2020
It's fine, yeah! But you would add some "," to separate the sentence. Then, it will be more easy to reed
May 27, 2020
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