I really liked the post written by Richard and the baboon.

Hi Richard,

Welcome back:) and thank you as usual you enhance your educational, informative role on italki platform.

Regards

Thanks to those who have responded to this post:

Another set of unclear sentences and the corrected re-written sentences will be posted soon...

After years of living in the dust laden jungle wiki the baboon emerged one dark night to report the finding of two stolen cars to two policemen from Groveton. The police men never did relay the report to the police station and the two cars have not been recovered, they have however been covered in baboon odour and the talking baboon who was reported escaped from the zoo, some twelve years earlier is still at large. If anybody spots two cars or a talking baboon, please report either occurrence immediately to the sheriff, if you are brave enough, or drunk enough. The sheriff misses his most loyal and dedicated officer wiki the baboon as everybody once called him.

One baboon and one former alcoholic officer nicknamed wiki the baboon the sheriff's former deputy and son in law, two reported stolen cars and two policemen, one dodgy zoo and a continuing confusion that has turned into a legend and a tourist attraction for the town of Groveton.

Sometimes we like to complicate things by condensing them.

Another option would be to separate the one sentence, which contains multiple thoughts, into two sentences.

Combining multiple thoughts into one sentence does not prove intelligence. If used properly, it can show a certain level of mastery of the language. However, the goal of communication is to be understood. This means that at times we must put our mastery aside and choose to use a more simplistic approach.