walid
a terrible holiday
<em>I had a terrible holiday last year , I went whit may family for a couple of week in the village , we went to the hotel whish is infront the sea and I realised that the room had a double booked , so we moved to another hotel in another town , it was horrible and dirty and what I hate moste was the noises and the bathroom all I did was tooch the shower and it exploded by my face. </em>
<em>all I need now is a real holiday.</em>



is there any mistakes here and i need a suggest
Jun 4, 2020 6:17 PM
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I had a terrible holiday last year. I went <s>whit may</s> with my family for a couple of weeks <s>in</s> to the village. We went to <s>the</s> a hotel which is in front of the sea and I realized that the room had been double booked. So we moved to <s>another</s> the other hotel in another town, it was horrible, dirty and what I hated most<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">e</s> was the noise<s style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">s.</s> <s>and</s> The bathroom -- all I did was touch the shower and it exploded <s>by</s> on my face. All I need now is a real holiday.

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I hope this helps Walid!)

June 4, 2020
walid
Language Skills
Arabic, English, French
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Arabic, English