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谁能帮我改正我的翻译? :-)

这是我的英文成中文的翻译。乱着呢!!你们可以帮我改正这个翻译吗?

谢谢!!!!


自动化

 

One of the greatest advances in modern technology has been the invention of computers. They are already widely used in industry and in universities and the time may come when it will be possible for ordinary people to use them as well.

现代技术最莫大的进步之一就是电脑的发明。现在电脑已经在实业,大学上得到广泛的应用,将来普通人也将有可能使用电脑.

 

Computers are capable of doing extremely complicated work in all branches of learning. They can solve the most complex mathematical problems or put thousands of unrelated facts in order.

电脑能够在各专业中用来做很复杂的任务。它们可以解决很棘手的数学问题或将成千上万的互不相关的数据系统化。

 

These machines can be put to varied uses. For instance, they can provide information on the best way to prevent traffic accidents, or they can count the number of times the word ‘and’ has been used in the Bible.

这些机器有多种不同的作用。譬如,它们可以提供最好避免交通堵塞的信息,或者它们可以用来数在《圣经》里有多少字。

 

Because they work accurately and at high speeds, they save research workers years of hard work. This whole process by which machines can be used to work for us has been called automation.

电脑因为做事做得既精密又快捷,而能节省研究人员许多年功夫。这个我们用电脑做事的过程叫作‘自动化’。

 

In the future, automation may enable human beings to enjoy far more leisure than they do today. The coming of automation is bound to have important social consequences.'

将来,自动化可以使人类比现在享受更休闲的生活。自动化的进程必定给人类将带来许多重要社会结果。

 

Some time ago an expert on automation, Sir Leon Bagrit, pointed out that it was a mistake to believe that these machines could ‘think’. There is no possibility that human beings will be ‘controlled by machines’.

不久之前,自动化专家布里坦爵士,指出了相信这些机械能够自己思考是错误的。人类‘被机器控制’是不可能的。

 

Though computers are capable of learning from their mistakes and improving on their performance, they need detailed instructions from human beings in order to be able to operate. They can never, as it were, lead independent lives, or ‘rule the world’ by making decisions of their own.

虽然电脑可以出错,长一智和改进性能,但是电脑仍需要详尽指令好让它们作用。它们无法,而且永远无法孤立地生活,或以自己的意志去‘统治”世界。

 

Aug 7, 2008 10:32 AM
Comments · 11

谢谢你们。你们都改得很细。

我还有几个翻译。我以后会贴别的。我们加以谈论吧!

August 8, 2008
I can’t input the rest part at here any more,so  write them down on your blackboard.
Please find the answer at there。
怎么也不能再发不上去剩下的部分,所以就写在了你的小黑板上了,在那看看我的答案吧。
Bye the way,do not write your questions at here ,hard to input!
August 8, 2008
YOU die very very great job!
but some little flaws,
之前我很用心的修改,竟然没回复上去!现在没心情再弄一遍了,就简单的指出我觉得中国人平常不大习惯的说法吧:
August 8, 2008

In the future, automation may enable human beings to enjoy far more leisure than they do today.
将来,自动化可能使人类享受到远比现在悠闲的生活。自动化的进程必将给人类带来许多重要的社会结果。

August 8, 2008
打错了,呵呵我做得是汉译英。
August 8, 2008
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KungFoo
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Cantonese), English
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), Chinese (Cantonese)