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topic:Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants.
Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home.
Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

Nowadays, most people choose to eat in restaurants especially fast-food.Yet they don’t  the disadvantages.İn my opinion cooking and eating at home is better than eating out for instance in cafe or canteen.Becaus ı like cooking , ı will get fresh and safety foods and ı can save alot of Money.

First of all home-made cooking is more healthier and clean than anywhere.You know which vegetables or meat are used in the meal.Furthermore you’re sure that it doesn’t have any hormon like monosodiumglutamat.However fatty and high caloric foods overtime can lead to diabet and heart disease.

Another benefit is cheaper than restaurants for everytime.For instance,when you eat a simple dinner in restaurant you have to pay great amount of Money because  good food are very expensive . You not only pay for foods, but also for their service.With the same amount of Money ıf ı g oto market ı can buy alot of foods for more people which are chepaer. Moreover they are also healthy vegetable.

The last and most important reason is more intensive communicate in home than restaurant.During the cooking and especially  eating.İn my country most teenage girl’s want to learn cooking from their mother.Thus ı think it’s the best time tos hare our feelings.Eating at home instead of at a restaurant gives the entire family time to talk about their day.

In conclusion, both of them have advantages and disadvantages.From my perspective , everyone in the World sholud prefer  preparing our foods at home and saving their Money for our children.

 

Apr 9, 2012 10:24 AM
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Nowadays, most people choose to eat in restaurants especially fast-food. One disadvantage in my opinion is that cooking and eating at home is better than eating out for instance than if someone were to eat in a cafe or canteen. The reason for this is because I like cooking, so I will make sure that the foods are fresh and safe. Another reason for this is because it will help me save a lot of money.

 

First of all, homemade cooking is more healthier and clean than anywhere else. I know which vegetables or meat are being used in the meal that I am preparing. Furthermore, I am sure that it doesn't have any hormone like monosodium glutamate. However, fatty and high caloric foods can lead to diabetes and heart disease.

 

 

August 7, 2012
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