Katya
First Chinese Littering ;)

 

在一本树有熟李子

 

他们都很好吃!

 

他们使我想起我的童年,

他们使我想起天。


Plumbs are ripe on the tree...

They are very tasty!

They remind me of my childhood,

They remind me of autumn...


Not sure whether I used 使...想起 right, I will appreciate your help... ;) 谢谢!


May 23, 2012 2:33 PM
Comments · 16

Melaminefree, thank you kindly for your kind explanations, my Chinese is an embryo in comparison with other languages I know... but anyway, thank you for paying attention to my work.

May 26, 2012

Jeff, you have left only 李子from my version! ;))) Thank you for being inspired. ;)

May 26, 2012

Jade, thanks for the explanation and reassurance. <img title="Wink" src="http://www.italki.com/Scripts/tinymce/jscripts/tiny_mce/plugins/emotions/img/smiley-wink.gif" alt="Wink" border="0" />

May 26, 2012

Benben, really sorry for the late reply. I appreciate your help, your version is much Chinese professional of course :))) Ta.

May 26, 2012

Anyway, it is a good attempt in helping Katya.

May 24, 2012
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Katya
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Russian, Urdu
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), Urdu