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Star Wars

This one is written in the same period as others.  How apt it is now!

 

Star Wars

 

Twinkling hues of fiery stars

Splashed against the canvass of midnight blue.

Each vying with brilliance to rule.

 

With meteors and comets as weapons

Combating with surging vengeance

Cutting the heavens through and through.

 

Bedazzling the dark world below

With their display of scintillating flashes.

Too soon, they will learn,

With the rising of the autumn moon.

Aug 7, 2012 9:38 AM
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I just inspired by your translation of BYGONE DREAMS, It is just for fun and for a change.

 

Star Wars月夜星战

 

Twinkling hues of fiery stars炙热群星, 闪烁光芒.

Splashed against the canvas of midnight blue.溅满夜空,犹如画卷.

Each vying with brilliance to rule.星海璀璨 ,群起争辉.

 

With meteors and comets as weapons 流星为剑,彗星作戟.

Combating with surging vengeance复仇对抗,阵阵火花.

Cutting the heavens through and through.次次划过,长长夜空.

 

Bedazzling the dark world below 眩目苍穹,黑暗世界.

With their display of scintillating flashes.闪闪发光,炫耀展示.

Too soon, they will learn,徐徐秋月,冉冉升起.

With the rising of the autumn moon.黯然失色,感叹即逝.

August 10, 2012

烘托 and 铺垫 make me think of my teacherCry

http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/228049.htm#ST

August 8, 2012

满天星斗争辉

August 8, 2012

canvass or canvas?

August 8, 2012

星斗大战

August 8, 2012
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