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  At first,I want to introduce myself .I'm Rebacca,a nineteen year old girl.I am outgoing and I like making friends.I think this is my important reason to learn English.Then,I think English is a amazing language.I want to improve my English,so I can speak with many foreigners and know more interesting cultures.I hope someone can help me ,and I aslo can help you to learn Chinese.we can study together.Smile

Nov 2, 2012 4:49 AM
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hi, i can help you, i same with you, but my speaking is not well. i want to improve my english and talk to foreign people in this site

 

 

November 2, 2012

我会努力的

November 2, 2012

1.   a nineteen-year-old girl.

2. It is the important reason for me to learn English.

3. I think English is an amazing language.

November 2, 2012

我不知道你学了几年的英语了,所以对你的英语不敢恭维。但是有几个语法错误,

a nineteen year old girl 应该是a nineteen years old girl

I think this is my important reason 我认为不通顺,你看这样好I think this is an important reason to learn

 a amazing language 应该是 an amazing language

这个自我介绍我认为最大的缺点就是上下衔接的不连贯。主语I 用的太多了,有的时候可以变换一下句式。

你自己试着在重新写下

November 2, 2012

hi! :)

I would love to help you improve English and learn Chinese from you as well, and hopefully we can study together ~

November 2, 2012
rebacca
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English