How are you doing today, i hope every things is ok with you as is my pleasure to contact you after viewing your profile which really interested me in having communication with you if you will have the desire with me so that we can get to know each other better and see what will happen in future. i will be very happy if you can write to me through my email for easiest communication and to know all about each other, here is my email (rejoice_4doe@ymail.com) i will be waiting to hear from you as i wish you good luck this week. Yours new friend. rejoice

范仲淹 蘇幕遮

碧雲天， 黃葉地，秋色連波，波上寒煙翠。
山映斜陽天接水，芳草無情，更在斜陽外。
黯鄉魂，追旅思，夜夜除非， 好夢留人睡。
明月樓高休獨倚， 酒入愁腸， 化作相思淚。

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仄平平，平仄仄，中仄平平、中仄平平仄。中仄平平平仄仄，中仄平平、中仄平平仄。

仄平平，平仄仄，中仄平平、中仄平平仄。中仄平平平仄仄，中仄平平、中仄平平仄。

你自己寫的嗎?

范仲淹也有寫過<<蘇幕遮>>

不過你好像有些平仄沒對仗(?)

還有"茕茕孑立"應為五字。

这是你自己写的么？

。。。貌似知道了