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My name is Giao.i come from vietnam, i begin learn english.i have a little essay about my life but it has many grammar mistakes.all people help me. 
My day begin wake up at 7:00AM and go to school after sign up face book.The afternoon, i am seen wanderring around the street to looking for interesting things, and i go back home to eat and run some errands.Next i go to bookshop near there.This is own relax here, i looking for some books and read it in bookshop.i can read very fast.but the bookshop don't provide seat for close up at 10:00 PM.Sometime, i go to walk around in the park, i can see children play games and all people go to walk foth. The atmosphere is very funny.I uasualy make friend with people.At night,before go to bed i always write joural.That is my one day.

Dec 21, 2012 11:49 AM
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