Mari
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I am a creative person, I like to make crafts, play guitar and sing, and I'm good at it, but I think my greatest virtue is perseverance. Not give up and perseveres have always given me good results. Singing and playing guitar are not just hobbies for me, are a way of thanking God for all that I have and what does not, for me it is a commitment to do make people enjoy the songs of the church. One of these days I would like to record a single and raise enough money to help my parents pay for my college. One of my biggest goals is to speak English and used to work perfectly. I would like to study psychology, but also I have in mind to work in a multinational company.

I appreciate your advice

Jun 12, 2014 10:30 PM
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I am a creative person. I enjoy making crafts, playing the guitar, and singing. I'm good at all of these, but I think my greatest virtue is perseverance. Not giving up and persevering have always given me good results. Singing and playing the guitar aren't just hobbies for me, but are ways of thanking God for all that I have. I am committed to making people enjoy the songs in church. One of these days I would like to record a single and raise enough money to help my parents pay for my college education. One of my biggest goals is to speak English fluently for my career. I would like to study psychology, but I am also interested in one day working for a multinational company. I appreciate your advice.

June 12, 2014

Thank you :D

November 30, 2015
Mari
Language Skills
English, Spanish
Learning Language
English