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My last holiday..

2 years ago i went to Malta, for four days, whit my friend. We went by Catamaran, it was an unforgetable experience because Malta it's very beautiful places. It has gorgeus sight which  you can visit by turist bus and good beaches where you can fun in worm dasy. There are two casinos and a lot of hotels and restourants everywhere. At night you can fun going to the discomusic or stripclub, personally i prefear to go in the outdoor seats where you can smoke the hooka whit your friends and relaxing a bit. We housed in the Baystreet Hotel, a good Hotel Three strars inexpansive, whit swimming pool and restourant inside. That Hotel was located in Paceville, a small district near Sanjulian City. In Paceville you can find a long street full of shops, bar and discos. I going to go back there because i liked it and bacause i want to vist others places that i can't visit before, i want to visit Gozo, the small island near Malta and Valletta its Capital. I hope to learn english for go back there bacause there are a few italian people there. I want to learn it because is the first language in the world which can to you of talk and know new cultures and new ways of thinking.

Jul 22, 2014 12:52 PM
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I hope to learn English ["English", "Italian" ecc. sono nomi propri] to go back there because there are few Italian people there. I want to learn it because it is the first language in the world through which you can get to know new cultures and new ways of thinking.

 

Brava! :) Fai attenzione ai piccoli errori

July 22, 2014

We stood at the Baystreet Hotel, a good inexpensive, three-star hotel [non iniziare "hotel" con una lettera maiuscola; non è un nome proprio], with a swimming pool and restaurant inside. That hotel was located in Paceville, a small district near Sanjulian City. In Paceville you can find a long street full of shops, bars [plurale] and discos. I am going to go back there because I liked it and since I want to visit other ["other" non è come "altro" in italiano; è sempre singolare rispetto alla parola modificata] places that I haven't visited before, I want to visit Gozo, the small island near Malta and Valletta its capital ["capital" non è un nome proprio].

July 22, 2014

2 years ago I [in questo caso, "I" è un nome proprio--si scrive in maiuscola] went to Malta for four days with my friend. We went by Catamaran, it was an unforgettable experience because Malta is a very beautiful place. It has gorgeous sights which you can visit by tourist bus, and good beaches where you can have fun on warm days. There are two casinos, a lot of hotels, and restaurants everywhere. At night you can have fun going to the disco [disco funziona, ma di solito diciamo "night club"]or to the strip club. Personally, I prefer the outdoor seats where you can smoke the hooka with your friends and relax a bit.

July 22, 2014
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