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Is it a real story?

I read a cool comment yesterday, I wonder is it actual or just fun.

It said: " one day president Obama and his wife have been at a restaurant, while they have being eaten , the restaurant owner spoke with Obama's wife, after that Obama asked her what he said. Michael told him he said he had loved me when he was a young man.

Obama smiled and said :"you would be the owner if this restaurant if you have married him."

Michael smiled at her husband's face and said "if I married him he would be a US president now". ;-)

It notices the power of women.

Could someone please correct my mistakes.

Nov 29, 2014 3:26 PM
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ha!  I meant it should be "if" :)  

I added color three times.  The last time I obviously missed some.. 

Just for fun.... for should also be red.

 

Ok, I am done here.. even if I still have mistakes.  :) It has been a strange morning!!!!!!

 

 

November 30, 2014

space between Michelle and smiled.  :)

Cross out one Michael and change the color. 

Same with if and of.. it should be of.. 

November 30, 2014

Michael Michellesmiled at her husband's face and said, "If I had married him he would be a US president now." ;-)

It notices attests to the power of women.

 

Could Would someone please correct my mistakes?

 

corrections
corrections as I prefer not to use red for someone's name
suggestions

spacing

November 30, 2014

I read a cool comment yesterday. I wonder is it actual true or just for fun.


It said: "One day President Obama and his wife have been were at a restaurant. While they were eating have being eaten, the restaurant owner spoke with Obama's wife. After that Obama asked her what he had said. Michael Michelle told him that he said he had loved me her when he was a young man. Obama smiled and said, "You would be the owner if of this restaurant if you have had married him."

November 30, 2014

True story or not, it is pertinent and can make us pause about our perceptions and attitudes. Your story also made me smile. Thank you for posting it, Parham.


I have made corrections and tried to post them twice, but italki won't allow it. Clearly my message is short but italki says it is not within 2 and 2000 characters.  I will try once more!!

November 30, 2014
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