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Help with text in 日本語



I am a Japanese student. I wrote a piece of text where I say a few things. This text was written by me, not translated by some random tool. It took me a lot of research and a few days to come up with the pieces. This is the best I could come up with. I need help with:


1. Making sure this makes sense. lol.

2. If it is grammatically correct or not and what a Japanese native would say (I am interested in keeping it basic-Japanese-student simple). I know there are formal, informal, honorific, and humble versions. I am interested in learning the formal one at the moment (I believe right now it is the way to go).

3. Make suggestions on how to write certain sections.


This is the text:




This is the text in English:


Hello, my name is Emilio: nice to meet you. I am Venezuelan (from Venezuela). I am a business owner. I am married. I like languages, food, and beer. Finally, I have a son: his name is Dominick. Good bye.





Dec 11, 2014 4:26 AM
Comments · 2


December 11, 2014

ありがとうございます、Japanese Specialist.

December 12, 2014
Language Skills
English, French, Japanese, Spanish
Learning Language
French, Japanese