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When I entered the 12th grade year, I started thinking about universities .I liked chemistry, so I chose Ha Noi University of Pharmacy. And my choice is correct . Now, I'm a freshman this school and I'm proud of it. My school was built in 1904. It is one of the oldest schools in the country and it has the architectural style of the French nation. My school has a history of hundreds of years so it's quite small. Although small school , the people who work and study here is not small. In the cause of the characteristics of the pharmaceutical industry, so my teachers are very careful, meticulous. Because each tablet is human life. Students of school are young people and enthusiastic, eager for learning. People often think that students of school only know learn many thick textbook ,but everyone was wrong. Students of school are very dynamic, confident and creative. At school ,there are many clubs such as gui-tar club, basketball club, club blood .... School is also very interesting. I like practicing the chemistry hours . We make chemical experiments with test tubes, with a pipette, with the chemical. You think that if you pour this solution into that solution. They will react together. After reaction , I have a new solution and we can create solutions with full color. Each practical taught me so many things. It taught me the accuracy to every drop of liquid, creativity, flexibility ....I am very proud of my school tradition. The school is a place to train generations of pharmacists. They drug research, drug counseling..In the pharmaceutical industry department, they expose to many toxic organic substances. This organic matter make them more susceptible to cancer but they accept it.It is words which i want to share.. Thank you for reading it. I hope to get the words to share about your school. I expect that someday you will come to visit my school. Wishing you a day full of energy.

Jan 4, 2015 4:12 AM
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It is club which donate blood. They are volunteer  who suggest other people donate blood to save someone's life

January 4, 2015

  Your writing is generally quite good.  I was only puzzled when reading reference to "club blood".

January 4, 2015
Language Skills
English, French, Vietnamese
Learning Language
English, French