Hello everyone, it is the first time I come to italki, I am kind of excited that I can meet friends from all over the world.
I really hope you can offer me a hand. I am applying for an accounting master program in an American University UIUC. Recently, I finished my personal statement, and have already rectified it several times according to advice offered by my Chinese friends. But before I submit it, I really hope that someone who is proficiency in English/ a native English speaker can help me with it so that I can avoid some Chinglish mistakes, LOL. May be you could offer me some sensible advice so that I can make a little progress :)
Hopefully, after I finish all my application process, I will spend more time here, we can exchange ideas, make friends, and learn from each other!
If you can offer me a hand, please send me message with your email so that I can email you my PS. I really really appreciate all your support and I am looking forward to your good advice :)
P.S. my DDL for application is Jan. 15.
P.S. I am in Xi'an,the starting point of the Silk Road and home to the Terracotta Army of Emperor Qin Shi Huang. Then ,in March, I will go to Amoy (Xiamen), a beautiful habor city. If you are going to visit these two cities in China, I am honored to be your tour guide!