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Imagine you received a letter from pen pal and write your own answer about your plan for summer.

Dear Marry!
I have just received your letter and I’m glad to know that you have finished your semester at school. Your plans for this summer sounds great. I also begin making plans for my vacation.
I have lots of things to do this summer. First of all, I want to refresh my self after hard working for while. Thus, I decide to spend about a week on visiting Nha Trang which have many beautiful landscapes. After that, I will come back Da Nang city.I will find a part- time work in hotel so that I have more experiences.
Besides ,I will join an English listening course because I want to improve my listening skill. I still have many plans in my mind but I’m afraid that I don’t have enough time to make them.
Marry, you used to say me that you love Da Nang city and you really want to come Vietnam for somedays. I think it would be more great if you make it in this summer.I will meet you.I hope so.
I will be looking forward to your letter.
Give my love to your parents and brothers.
With love
Hao

Jan 18, 2015 11:05 AM
Comments · 4

Guess you're looking for some feedback.

 

The content is appropriate and rich. You did well writing the opening and closing.

 

Sentence-to-sentence coherence is good.

 

There is room for improvement in terms of organization, grammar and register, though.

January 18, 2015

hi! sorry i'm not marry my name's issam from morocco ;) 

 

 

 

January 18, 2015

this is my exercise that i must do in my class.Yes. i wish but i think my knowledge isn't enough to do it. 

January 18, 2015

Are you preparing for IELTS? :)

January 18, 2015
Tắc Kè
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Vietnamese
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), English