Hi! I could help. You've got some mistakes:
new persons- it's better to use "people"
i would like speak- "I'd like to talk"
Good luck! Elena
You can add me, I'm also here to practice, share opinios and maybe have nice talking.
I also would like to speak with you ahhh
Helloo, when do you want speak, send me a sms,i want to practice me english,bye