Me reading a couple of chapters from Assimil Chinese with Ease Vol 2.
You got well over half of them right, and you sound pretty good, so congratulations. I listed the things that stood out below. You have some issues with flow, which I'm sure you're aware of. I would suggest that you make shadowing a few minutes part of your daily regime until you get more comfortable.
几点 - 几 s/b ji3, sounded like yi3
谁的 － 的 s/b de5, sounded like de4
办公室 - 公 s/b gong1, sounded like gong4
公司 - s/b gong1si1, sounded like gong4si4
不行 - 行 s/b xing2, sounded like xing1
可能 - 能 s/b neng2, sounded like nang2
很 - hen3, tone is good but your vowel sound is off. It should sound like hun in Attila the hun, not hen in the little red hen.
不下 － 不 due to tone sandhi, this should be pronounced as bu2, not bu4
美国 － 国 s/b guo2, sounded like gou5
当然 - 当 s/b dang1, sounded like dang2
六 - s/b liu4, sounded like you4
我们 - 们 s/b men5, sounded like me5
去 - s/b qu4, sounded like chu4
像 － s/b xiang4, sounded like xiang2
先生 - 先 s/b xian1, sounded like shen4
肯 － ken3, tone is good but your vowel sound is off. It should sound like cun like the c word without the t, not ken like in ken and barbie.
要来 － s/b yao4lai2, sounded like yao3lai3
先生 - 先 s/b xian1, sounded like xian4
时 (shi2 - time) － you have a typo in your subtitles, s/b 是 （shi4 - is)
先生 - 先 s/b xian1, sounded like qin1
陈 － s/b chen2, sounded like chen3
负责 － 责 s/b ze2, sounded like ze4
委员 － s/b wei3yuan2, sounded like wei2yuan3
开会 - 开 s/b kai1, sounded like kai4
两 - s'b liang3, sounded like liang2
不然 - 不 s/b bu4, sounded like bu3
法人 - s/b fa3ren2, sounded like fa'r3
Wow! Thanks Mr. Aeigis. I'm aware of the lack of stress when asking questions that didn't contain, 吗。 and nodded while reading at some point to indicate my pronunciation was way off, but your correction gives me enough content to work on :-)
Mr.Aegis' correction is very nice!
Correcttion: 我的汉字（or 中文）读得怎么样？汉子 and 汉字 are different. 汉子 refers to man. The subject of the video on Youku - 老外会看汉子 Other people may understand it in this way - A foreigner who can see men. :)
Your pronunciation is quite good. Keep up the good work.
Oh, yeah. I did notice that men almost made it sound like I said little sister instead of, us.