Sara
Opinion essay: positive images of celebrities have a good effect on people. People always need a role model in their lives, a sort of hero, a mentor who inspires them. For most people celebrities play this role, especially among the youger generations. It is said that positive images of celebrities can have a beneficial effect on people. The way I see it, imitate celebrities' positive behavoiurs can often contribute tu self-development. Yo start with, we can consider stars as people who worked hard to make their dreams come true. who never gave up, who have always been stubbon in order to turn their passions into their job. Learning about the biographies of famous people helps to understand that succes requires a great deal of effort which is the key to achieve any goal. Furthermore celebrities' charity activities may inspire fans to do the same, for instance taking up volounteering work for charity organisations. In addition to this, celebs who pay attention to their shape can be a good vehicle to promote a healthy life style and fight obesity. Many of them for exemple use social networks to share pictures of their healthy meals or videos of their workouts. At the same time, we must also consider that celebrities' pictures are always modified and adjusted by specific programmes, so as to hyde any imperfection which could push young people to be too judgemental with themselves. They could lost their self-confidence and seek for perfection developing eating disorders or have excessive surgery. In other words, I agree that positive images of celebrities can actually change people lives and contribute to their fulfillment.
Jun 30, 2015 7:11 PM
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Opinion Essay: Positive Images of Celebrities Have a Good Effect on People

 

People always need a role model in their lives, a sort of hero, a mentor who inspires them. For most people celebrities play this role, especially among the younger generations. It is said that positive images of celebrities can have a beneficial effect on people. The way I see it, imitating celebrities' positive behavoiurs can often contribute to self-development. 
 
To start with, we can consider stars as people who worked hard to make their dreams come true. who never gave up, who have always been persistant in order to turn their passions into their job. Reading the biographies of famous people helps to understand that succes requires a great deal of effort, which is the key to achieve any goal. Furthermore, celebrities' charity activities may inspire fans to do the same; for instance taking up volunteer work for charity organisations. In addition to this, celebs who pay attention to their shape can be a good vehicle to promote a healthy life style and fight obesity. Many of them for example, use social networks to share pictures of their healthy meals or videos of their workout sessions.

At the same time, we must also consider that celebrities' pictures are always modified and adjusted by specific programmes, so as to hide any imperfection, which could push young people to be too judgemental with themselves. They could lose their self-confidence and seek for perfection, thus developing eating disorders or have unnecessary surgery.

In other words, I agree that positive images of celebrities can actually change people's lives and contribute to their fulfillment. :)

June 30, 2015
Grazie mille ☺
July 1, 2015
Ci sono un paio di errori di disattenzione ma per il resto mi sembra perfetto.
June 30, 2015
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Sara
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English, French, Italian
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English, French