Stella
Please Help me revise the paragraph if it’s not natural, thanks! The topic is: how marketers target your nose The body: Traditional marketing always focus on attracting people’s ears and eyes, but nowadays, marketers start to pay attention to attract people’s nose. If you find that when you walk into a mall or a bank or a museum or even close to a food advertisement, you can smell something related to the place/ads and that scent makes your mood uplifted. For example, casinos use scent to negate the smell of cigarettes in their place. And also you can feel the firework scent when you stand in front of a war picture in a exhibit. Or you can smell the perfume when you walk into a mall. And researchers prove that these nice scent will make people happy and pay more money to buy the goods. It’s a popular method to attract millennial people. But remember not every scent can make people satisfied, some weird scent come out in weird places could completely backfire. Such as, when you walk into Starbucks, and you can’t smell the coffee but the scent of hamburger, will you spend your coffee time in Starbucks again? I definitely believe nobody would like to experience that. Last but not the limited to say: so sorry that there’re Too many words for u to read, I’d like to help you with your Chinese essay if you like.🥰
Sep 12, 2021 3:39 PM