yulius
I live in depok, a city which near jakarta the capital city of Indonesia. Depok is known as "the city of begal" Because depok has many cases of begal motos in a year. FYI, begal is a type of robber who operates on street. The perpetrators ride a motorcycle armed with bladed weapons or a gun. And their purpose is to steal their victim's motorcycle. Besides of that, depok is a good city, because if you live in depok you can avoid floods and traffic jam.
Oct 27, 2020 8:17 AM
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I live in Depok, a city which near Jakarta the capital city of Indonesia. Depok is known as "the city of Begal" Because Depok has many cases of Begal motos in a year. For your information, Begal is a type of robber who operates on the street. The perpetrators ride a motorcycle armed with bladed weapons or a gun, and their purpose is to steal their victim's motorcycle. Besides that, Depok is a good city, because if you live in depok you can avoid floods and traffic jams.
I would love to hear about some of the things you love about Depok in your next paragraph. It is really awesome that I get to know you in this way. Well done 😀
October 27, 2020
I live in depok, a city that's near jakarta, the capital city of Indonesia. Depok is known as "the city of begal" Because depok has many cases of robbery with motorcycles in a year. FYI, "begal" is a type of robber who operates on the streets. The robbers ride a motorcycle armed with bladed weapons or a gun. And they steal other motorcycles. Besides that, depok is a good city, because if you live in depok you can avoid floods and traffic jam. (Which Jakarta has plenty of ^ ^)
I think you should've defined what begal is, and then move forward, great one 😉
October 27, 2020
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yulius
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