Beatrice
Out of all the valuable learning experiences I have had the chance to have in recent years, few had a significant impact on my mindset and daily life such as the volunteering program I took part in back in August 2016 in southern Portugal. For two weeks, together with about twenty boys and girls from all over Europe, I lived in a charming farmhouse on the Algarve coast and learnt about permaculture, reforestation and how to take care of the space surrounding us.
Oct 1, 2020 10:31 AM
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Out of all the valuable learning experiences I have had the chance to have in recent years, few had a significant impact on my mindset and daily life such as the volunteering program I took part in back in August 2016 in southern Portugal. For two weeks, together with about twenty boys and girls from all over Europe, I lived in a charming farmhouse on the Algarve coast and learnt about permaculture, reforestation and how to take care of the space surrounding us.
Among all the valuable learning experiences I have had in recent years, few have left such a significant impact on both my mindset and daily life as the volunteering program in southern Portugal that I participated in during August 2016. For two weeks, along with about twenty other girls and boys from all over Europe, we all lived in a charming farmhouse on the Algarve coast, and learnt about permaculture, reforestation, and how to take care of the natural spaces surrounding us. Hi Beatrice. Great job! You have a good command of the English language, and your post was grammatically sound, but it just seemed awkward (at least to me!) in the reading of it. I cannot say that my version is better, but I would say that it is “smoother,” and thus, more readable. Keep writing and keep posting. I hope that this helps you.
October 2, 2020
Out of all the valuable learning experiences I have had the chance to have in recent years, few had a significant impact on my mindset and daily life such as the volunteering program I took part in back in August 2016 in southern Portugal. For two weeks, together with about twenty boys and girls from all over Europe, I lived in a charming farmhouse on the Algarve coast and learnt about permaculture, reforestation and how to take care of the space surrounding us.hey
October 1, 2020
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Beatrice
Language Skills
English, French, German, Italian, Russian, Spanish
Learning Language
English, German