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If anyone can make corrections into natural English I’d appreciate it! My 3-line a day. 201003 This is 5th day in Kobe. While I was taking care of a customer’s payment this morning,she said “I love your blouse so much,I hope I haven’t offended you for staring whole time I’m in the store.” It wouldn’t make me this happy if she complimented my shoes. (Does “ I was happier than if I would have been complimented my shoes” make sense?) Because I made the blouse I was wearing. It’s very simple one,the real sewing bees might think that’s something anybody can make. But it have lots of details,like the slit on the side is deep enough to reach back pocket of MY pants,and the pocket which is for holding pens,on the blouse is located where That’s easy for my hand to reach. And I love it myself. She made my day,and it turned out the sales ware great today😄
Oct 3, 2020 3:44 PM
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If anyone can make corrections into natural English I’d appreciate it! My 3-line a day. 201003 This is 5th day in Kobe. While I was taking care of a customer’s payment this morning,she said “I love your blouse so much,I hope I haven’t offended you for staring whole time I’m in the store.” It wouldn’t make me this happy if she complimented my shoes. (Does “ I was happier than if I would have been complimented my shoes” make sense?) Because I made the blouse I was wearing. It’s very simple one,the real sewing bees might think that’s something anybody can make. But it have lots of details,like the slit on the side is deep enough to reach back pocket of MY pants,and the pocket which is for holding pens,on the blouse is located where That’s easy for my hand to reach. And I love it myself. She made my day,and it turned out the sales ware great today😄
While I was taking care of a customer’s payment this morning, she said, “I love your blouse so much, I hope I haven’t offended you by staring at it the whole time I’ve been in the store!” I was so happy because I made the blouse that I was wearing. It’s a very simple one and those who sew regularly might think anyone could make one of these. However, this blouse has lots of detail, such as the slit on the side that is deep enough to reach the back pocket of my pants, so it’s easy to reach. I love this blouse and that customer made my day. And sales turned out to be great today, too!
October 3, 2020
If anyone can make corrections into natural English I’d appreciate it! My 3-line a day. 201003 This is the 5th day in Kobe. While I was taking care of a customer’s payment this morning, she said “I love your blouse so much. I hope I haven’t offended you for staring the whole time I’ve been in the store.” It wouldn’t have made me this happy if she had complimented me on my shoes. (Does “ I was happier than if I would have been complimented on my shoes” make sense?) Because I made my blouse. It’s very simple, the real sewing bees might think that it's something anybody can make. But it has lots of details. Like the slit on the side, it is deep enough to reach the back pocket of my pants. Also there is a pocket for holding pens that’s easy for my hand to reach. I love the blouse myself. She made my day and it turned out the sales were great today😄
Great job! That is a nice blouse. I sew a little so I know what you mean. The sentence “ I was happier than if I would have been complimented on my shoes” does make sense. You did awesome.
October 3, 2020
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English, Japanese
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