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is following text more formal or casual? in case of formal, could you give suggestions how to make it sound more casual without sounding rude? thanks in advance ๐Ÿค— ็š†ใ•ใ‚“ๆŠน่ŒถใŒๅฅฝใใงใ™ใ‹? ็งใฏๅคงๅฅฝใใงใ™ใ€‚ใ•ใใ”ใ‚ๅ‹้”ใจ่Œถๅœ’ใซ่กŒใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ใจใฆใ‚‚ใใ‚Œใ„ใชๅฅฅใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚็ง้”ใฏใŠใพใ‹ใ›ใ‚’ๆณจๆ–‡ใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ๆœ€ๅˆใฏๆŠน่Œถใ‚’ใ‚‚ใ‚‰ใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ใใ‚Œใง่‰ฒใ€…ใชๆŠน่Œถใฎ้ฃฒใ‚€ๆ–นใ‚’่ฉฆใ—ใฆใฟใ‚‹ใ€‚ไธ€็•ช้ข็™ฝใ‹ใฃใŸๆ–นใฏ่Œถ่‘‰ใ‚’้ฃŸในใ‚‹ๆ–นใงใ—ใŸใ€‚ใกใ‚‡ใฃใจใณใฃใใ‚Šใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ๅˆใ‚ใฆ่Œถ่‘‰ใจ้†คๆฒนใฎ้ฃŸในใ‚‹ๆ–นใ‚’่žใ„ใŸใ“ใจใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใงใ™ใŒใ€ใจใฆใ‚‚ใŠใ„ใ—ใ‹ใฃใŸใ€‚็พŽๅ‘ณใ„ใ‚ˆใ€‚ใœใฒ้ฃŸในใฆใฟใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
Feb 27, 2021 8:42 AM
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is following text more formal or casual? in case of formal, could you give suggestions how to make it sound more casual without sounding rude? thanks in advance ๐Ÿค— ็š†ใ•ใ‚“ๆŠน่ŒถใŒๅฅฝใใงใ™ใ‹? ็งใฏๅคงๅฅฝใใงใ™ใ€‚ใ•ใใ”ใ‚ๅ‹้”ใจ่Œถๅœ’ใซ่กŒใใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ใจใฆใ‚‚ใใ‚Œใ„ใชๅฅฅใŒใ‚ใ‚‹ใจๆ€ใ„ใพใ™ใ€‚็ง้”ใฏใŠใพใ‹ใ›ใ‚’ๆณจๆ–‡ใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ๆœ€ๅˆใฏๆŠน่Œถใ‚’ใ‚‚ใ‚‰ใ„ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ใใ‚Œใง่‰ฒใ€…ใชๆŠน่Œถใฎ้ฃฒใฟๆ–นใ‚’่ฉฆใ—ใฆใฟใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ไธ€็•ช้ข็™ฝใ‹ใฃใŸใฎใฏ่Œถ่‘‰ใ‚’้ฃŸในใ‚‹ๆ–นใงใ—ใŸใ€‚ใกใ‚‡ใฃใจใณใฃใใ‚Šใ—ใพใ—ใŸใ€‚ๅˆใ‚ใฆ่Œถ่‘‰ใจ้†คๆฒนใฎ้ฃŸในๆ–นใ‚’่žใ„ใŸใฎใงใ™ใŒใ€ใจใฆใ‚‚ใŠใ„ใ—ใ‹ใฃใŸใงใ™ใ‚ˆใ€‚ใœใฒ้ฃŸในใฆใฟใฆใใ ใ•ใ„ใ€‚
Iโ€™m not sure what ๅฅฅ means ๐Ÿ˜… If youโ€™d like to say formal style,you should say โ€œใŠใ„ใ—ใ‹ใฃใŸใงใ™ใ‚ˆโ€ or โ€œ็พŽๅ‘ณใ—ใ„ใงใ™ใ‚ˆโ€ if youโ€™d like to say casual style โ€œ็พŽๅ‘ณใ—ใ„ใ‚ˆโ€ is right. However youโ€™ve been writing formal style so I think you should use formal style
February 27, 2021
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