What I am proud of in the culture of the land of Persia is the historical background of my country and the first human rights charter in the world that was presented to humanity by the great Cyrus.

amin m.n

Sep 23, 2021 7:31 AM

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I am proud of the historical background of my country, Persia. Furthermore, we developed the first human rights charter in the world that was presented to humanity by the great Cyrus.

Hey Amin We can simplify the sentences as such! Hope this helps :)

September 23, 2021

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