Wendy
Would you help me make it shorter and easier?Thank you The mother of the Dongjiang Guerrillas - Li Shuhuan. The Party organization appointed her a teacher to Datang Elementary School, under the cover a teacher she was gathering and passing information for the guerrillas. The work was carried out smoothly.  Li Shuhuan utilized her position as an elementary school teacher to proactively attend various meetings held by the township, and made time to visit the local upper class in Dalingshan.  She made visits to the parents of the students. As a result, she not only got to know the social situation in Dori, but also got information about the activities of the enemy in the vicinity from it. In 1941, on her way to work at school, Li Shuhuan was apprehended by the Nationalist reactionaries. Nevertheless, she would rather die than give in, and eventually died with honor at the Nationalist army site in Kumquat Village. The commander of the Dongjiang column, Zeng Sheng, honored her with the glorious title of “Mother of the Revolution” at the assembly.
Sep 23, 2021 7:41 AM
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The mother of the Dongjiang Guerrillas is Li Shuhuan. The Party organization appointed her as a teacher to Datang Elementary School. Under the cover of a teacher, she was gathering and passing information for the guerrillas. The work was carried out smoothly. Li Shuhuan utilized her position to proactively attend various meetings held by the township, and made time to visit the local upperclass in Dalingshan. She even visited the parents of the students. As a result, she not only got to know the social situation in Dori, but also gained Intel on the enemy. On her way to school in 1941, Li Shuhuan was apprehended by the Nationalist reactionaries. Nevertheless, she would rather die than give in, and eventually passed with honor at the Nationalist army site in Kumquat Village. The commander of the Dongjiang column, Zeng Sheng, honored her with the glorious title of “Mother of the Revolution” at the assembly.
Hey Wendy Great little piece of writing and I definitely learnt something new! Hope my corrections help you learn as well :)
Sep 23, 2021 7:53 AM
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Wendy
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English