Stella
Today is a sunny day in Shanghai The mood is excited And my teacher and me talked about how to understand and accept the expectation of the society but still live with happiness in our daily life. It is such sure an impressive conversation. There’re lots of expectations from outside of our own world. Chinese youths are more difficult to struggle in the wave of society thoughts. Many young people follow the routine to study, get married, feed kids and wait for the retirement. Most of us feel not happy. Though some of us are lucky to change the situation, still that is the truth! What we can do is to understand the current societal situation and accept the mainstream views. And try our best to figure out what kinds of life is suitable for us and keep moving on. Live a simple life, concerned with doing right by ourselves and our loved ones. Choose nice people surrounded to support and encourage us! Please help me with the writing ✍️ thanks 🙏 and if you want me to read your Chinese paragraph, please let me know.
Sep 23, 2021 3:35 PM
Corrections · 4
Today is a sunny day in Shanghai The mood is excitable. My teacher and I talked about how to understand and accept the expectations of society but still live with happiness in our daily life. It was definitely an impressive conversation. There’re lots of expectations from outside our own world. Chinese youths are struggling more and more in the wave of society’s thoughts. Many young people follow the routine of studying, getting married, feeding their kids and waiting for retirement. Most of us feel unhappy. Though some of us are lucky to change the situation, still that is the truth! What we can do is to understand the current societal situation and accept the mainstream views. And try our best to figure out what kinds of life are suitable for us and keep moving. Live a simple life, concerned with doing right by ourselves and our loved ones. Choose nice people to support and encourage us! Please help me with the writing ✍️ thanks 🙏 and if you want me to read your Chinese paragraph, please let me know.
Great (and interesting) writing Stella, let me know if you need any explanations :)
Sep 23, 2021 5:26 PM
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Stella
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Korean
Learning Language
English, Korean