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Hello everyone! I purchased new shoes yesterday. The shoes is Nike. I’ve wanted to purchase the shoes since previous days, I was glad to buy it. It is really easy to wear and the design is so cool. I want to boast this shoes to everyone! The university just started, I can show off my sneaker.lol In any case, I’m glad to purchase it.
Sep 27, 2021 1:00 AM
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Hello everyone! I purchased new shoes yesterday. The shoes is Nike. I’ve wanted to purchase the shoes since previous days, I was glad to buy it. It is really easy to wear and the design is so cool. I want to boast this shoes to everyone! The university just started, I can show off my sneaker.lol In any case, I’m glad to purchase it.
Good day, everyone! I bought new shoes the other day. Nike is the brand of the shoes. I had wanted to acquire the shoes for a long time and was delighted to be able to do so. It's quite comfortable to wear, and the design is extremely cool. I'd like to brag about these shoes to everyone! I can show off my sneaker now that university has started.lol In any case, I'm happy to buy it.
Sep 27, 2021 1:36 AM
Hello everyone! I purchased new shoes yesterday. The shoes are Nike. I’ve wanted to purchase the shoes for a long time so I was glad to buy it. It is really easy to wear and the design is so cool. I want to boast this shoes to everyone! The university just started, now I can show off my sneakers. lol In any case, I’m glad I bought it.
Hi there! Sometimes we use the word bought instead of purchase as it sounds more casual. I could tell you were excited about your new sneakers. You use good expressions. Good job!
Sep 27, 2021 10:27 AM
Hello everyone! I purchased new shoes yesterday. The shoes are Nike. I’ve wanted to purchase these shoes for a long time, so I was glad to buy them. They are really easy to wear and the design is so cool. I want to boast about these shoes to everyone! University just started, so I can show off my sneakers .lol. In any case, I’m glad I purchased them.
I really like Nike sneakers as well! When writing about sneakers - they are a plural word, meaning there is more than one (eg. a pair of shoes = two shoes), so when you write about sneakers, always use "are", "these" and "they". I hope you enjoy showing off your new shoes! :)
Sep 27, 2021 10:16 AM
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