Magdalena Correa A.
The best place that I visited was Nathional Park Torres de Paine. I love this place because I can see amazing landscapes and obviously I took some pictures. I visited that on my vacations in 2020 with my mother, and my cousin’s family. We had the opportunity to go to the base of Torres, and this is one of the wonders of the world. When I was in this incredible place, I was impressed! I had never seen before a better land, the base has a turquoise lake and four big thin and large mountains and on there climbs I can see snow. The disadvantage of the trekking was the distance because we walk six hours for to go and back to the mountains. When we were walking near to the finish of the trip, suddenly a cougar appeared, my mother and my cousin were so nervous and started to return but I didn’t lose the opportunity to took a nice photograph!
Sep 27, 2021 1:36 AM
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The best place that I have visited is National Park Torres de Paine. I loved this place because I could watch amazing landscapes and I took some pictures of course. I visited that place on my vacation in 2020 with my mother, and my cousin’s family. We had an opportunity to go to the base of Torres which is one of the wonders of the world. When I was in this incredible place, I was impressed! I had never seen a better land before, the base had a turquoise lake and four big, thin and large mountains and when I climbed to the top I could see the snow. The disadvantage of the trekking was the distance because we walked six hours for going mountains and coming back. When we were close to the finish of the trip, suddenly a cougar appeared. My mother and my cousin were so nervous and they returned but I didn’t lose the opportunity to take a nice photograph!
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Sep 27, 2021 3:14 AM
The best place that I visited was Nathional Park Torres de Paine. I love this place because I got to see amazing landscapes and obviously, I took some pictures. I visited that place on my vacation in 2020 with my mother, and my cousin’s family. We had the opportunity to go to the base of Torres, and this is one of the wonders of the world. When I was in this incredible place, I was impressed! I had never seen a better land before, the base has a turquoise lake and four big thin and large mountains. At the top, I could see the snow. The disadvantage of the trekking was the distance because we walked a total of six hours to and from the mountains. When our trip was about to end, suddenly a cougar appeared. My mother and my cousin were so afraid. So, they turned back, but I didn’t lose the opportunity to take a nice photograph!
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Sep 27, 2021 2:12 AM
The best place that I have ever visited is Nathional Park Torres de Paine. I loved this place because I could see amazing landscapes. Obviously I took some beautiful pictures. I visited there for vacation in 2020 with my mother and my cousin’s family. We had the opportunity to go to the base of Torres, one of the wonders of the world. When I was in this incredible place I was so impressed! I had never seen a more magnificent place before. The base had a turquoise lake and four large thin mountains. I could see snow on their peaks. The only bad thing about the trek was the distance. We walked for six hours to go up the mountains and back. When we were getting close to the end of the trip, suddenly a cougar appeared! My mother and my cousin were so nervous they started to run back but I stayed because I didn’t want to miss out on the opportunity to take a nice picture!
Sep 27, 2021 6:11 PM
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Magdalena Correa A.
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English, Spanish
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English