Wendy
Could you please help me correct these sentences? Thanks The bear likes to sing in the snow. When the sun comes out , the snow melts into water, the bear feels sad. 1. Samuel is a student. He likes painting very much . He is good at painting boats and pigs. They are extremely lifelike. 2. My sister shows her new painting to me . It’s so funny. There is a lovely pig rowing the boat. I love her painting. 3. There is a pig lives on a small boat . He makes a living for painting. His paintings sell well. 1. Mike was watching TV. His mother asked him to stop to do homework . Now, Mike is doing his homework under the tree. 2. We were playing hide and seek in the park . Then we saw a nice TV under a big tree. “Whose is it?” We wondered. We stopped to study the TV. 3. I was swinging under the tree when I heard my favorite TV show was on. Then I stopped to rush into my room. 1. Nancy’s mum gave birth to a new baby in July . The baby is very cute . He has long eyelashes. 2. It’s July. It is hot and stuffy. The little baby sleeps in his cradle for a long time. He is getting fractious and tearful now. 3. Today is July 12th. It is the baby’s one-year birthday. Many relatives come to celebrate his birthday. He gets lots of presents. An uncle with long legs gives him a robot.
Sep 28, 2021 6:46 AM
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Could you please help me correct these sentences? Thanks. The bear likes to sing in the snow. When the sun comes out , the snow melts into water, the bear feels sad. 1. Samuel is a student. He enjoys painting very much . He is good at painting boats and pigs. They are extremely life like. 2. My sister showed her new painting to me . It was so funny. There is a lovely pig rowing the boat. I love her painting. 3. There is a pig that lives on a small boat . He makes a living by painting. His paintings sell well. 1. Mike was watching TV. His mother asked him to stop and his do homework . Now, Mike is doing his homework under the tree. 2. We were playing hide and seek in the park . Then we saw a nice TV under a big tree. “Who's could it be?” We wondered. We stopped to study the TV. 3. I was swinging under the tree when I heard my favorite TV show was on. Then I stopped to rush into my room. 1. Nancy’s mum gave birth to a baby in July . The baby is very beautiful. He has long eyelashes. 2. It is July and It is hot and stuffy. The little baby sleeps in his cradle for long periods of time. He is getting fractious and tearful now. 3. Today is July 12th. It is the baby’s first birthday. Many relatives have come to celebrate his birthday. He received lots of gifts. An uncle with long legs gave him a robot.
Oct 15, 2021 2:09 PM
Can you please help me correct these sentences? Thanks. The bear likes to sing in the snow. When the sun comes out , snow melts into water and the bear feels sad. 1. Samuel is a student. He likes painting a lot. He is good at making paintings of boats and pigs. They are extremely lifelike. 2. My sister showed me her new painting. It’s so funny. There is a lovely pig rowing the boat. I love her painting. 3. There is a pig, which lives on a small boat . He makes a living with his paintings. They sell well. 1. Mike was watching TV. His mother asked him to stop and do his homework. Now, Mike is doing his homework under a tree. 2. We were playing hide and seek in a park . Then we saw a nice TV under a big tree. “Whose is it?” We wondered. We stopped playing and went to check the TV. 3. I was swinging on a tree when I heard that my favorite TV show was on. I stopped and rushed to my room. 1. Nancy’s mom gave birth to a baby in July. The baby is very cute. He has long eyelashes. 2. It’s July. It is hot and stuffy. The little baby has been sleeping in his cradle for a long time. He is getting fractious and tearful now. 3. Today is July 12th. It is the baby’s one year birthday. Many relatives have come to celebrate his birthday. He is getting lots of presents. His uncle with long legs gave him a robot.
Sep 28, 2021 7:48 AM
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Wendy
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English