Mari Kim
Long time ago, there were a halmoni and two sisters. One day, on halmoni's way home with rice cakes for two sisters, out of the blue a tiger came up in front of her. The tiger was very hungry and asked her for a rice cake. Halmony noticed that the tiger would never happy with just one rice cake and keep asking more rice cakes. She decided to run away after giving rice cakes to the tiger but unfortunely tiger swallowed her. The mean tiger went to hamloni's house and pretended halmoni with her scarf around his head. Could you please make my sentences sound more natural? Thank you for your time and help.
Feb 13, 2022 9:55 AM
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Long time ago, there was a halmoni and her two sisters. One day, on halmoni's way home with rice cakes for her two sisters, out of the blue a tiger came up in front of her. The tiger was very hungry and asked her for a rice cake. Halmony noticed that the tiger would never be happy with just one rice cake and it kept asking for more. She tried to run away after the giving rice cakes to the tiger but unfortunely the tiger caught and ate her. The mean tiger went to hamloni's house and pretended to be the halmoni with her scarf around his head. Could you please make my sentences sound more natural? Thank you for your time and help.
Feb 13, 2022 10:00 AM
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