虾仁
My last trip was short but happy .Now let me show you what i experiensed Two years ago, i went to Dalian .It is in the north of China . It is popular for its sea food .If you come there ,don't forget to eat some sea food .There is lots of delicious food that i can't desicribe to you bacause of my low English level.But when you come ,you will know . Because we came there in summer ,so we could enjoy there sea and sunshine .I swam in the sea .We all had a good time. That is my trip.I know i may make lots of mistakes because i am careless.So peales help me to treat it. Thank you very much. By the way, my name is Alisa. I am glad to be friends with you.
Feb 26, 2021 2:26 PM
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My last trip was short but happy .Now let me tell you what I experienced Two years ago, I went to Dalian. It is in the north of China . It is popular for its sea food. If you go there, don't forget to eat some sea food. There is lots of delicious food that I can't describe to you because of my low English level. But when you come, you will know. Because we went there in summer, so we could enjoy the sea and sunshine. I swam in the sea. We all had a good time. That was my trip. I know I may make lots of mistakes because I am careless.So please help me to correct it. Thank you very much. By the way, my name is Alisa. I am glad to be friends with you.
你好 Alisa! This is very good, just a few mistakes. Eight years ago I was teaching in 长春 and I went to Dalian twice. After that I went to teach in 厦门. It is by the sea but warmer! 加油 Happy Lantern Festival!
February 26, 2021
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